Clean Up Edit

This page seems a little messy and a lot of trivia is either repetitive, lengthy, or unnecessary for the article and one or two could just be incorporated into the article itself. Anyone want to help or suggest clean up ideas to give this article higher quality? (Forgon the Forgotten 23:39, December 12, 2010 (UTC))

Sounds like you know what you're doing, just go ahead and give it a roll. --Light Daxter - Talk 00:14, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, go for it Forgon, or if you prefer, let us do it. Shrev64(Talk • Contribs) 00:28, December 13, 2010 (UTC)Shrev64

I'll try an edit and if its unsatisfactory, feel free to change it and edit it yourself. (Forgon the Forgotten 00:37, December 13, 2010 (UTC))

My Changes Edit

Alright, I began editting the article and I am still working on changing some quotes so they match the others in the correct format and I need some one to read over my edits and help me correct any mispellings or misuse of conjugation in the page. I also need someone to add the necessary links to other articles like the first mention of Sly and Conner Cooper and Mz Ruby and the Panda King. (Forgon the Forgotten 02:27, December 13, 2010 (UTC))

True Age Edit

Alright, I'm assuming Zako11 put this in since he's the last one to edit this page but where and when has Clockwerk ever stated being 7000 years old? I'll pull out my old ps2 and play the level again but unless I have a source or hear it myself, this will be removed. Also, at least discuss it first before putting it in and check your grammar first, that entire sentence doesn't even belong in the beginning of his biography page. If anything, it should be trivia since it could just be part of his mindless rambling while repairing himself (he does quote on quote say "I am... been selling... flowers...") so theirs no real proof to this being correct. (Forgon the Forgotten 22:50, December 20, 2010 (UTC))

Clockwerk and TechnologyEdit

How could someone like Clockwerk, who was alive during Slytankhamen II's time, have acquired the technology to become immortal? ScorpionTail 20:28, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Because it isn't technology that made him immortal. It is a "steady diet of jealousy and hate".

Teenbat 21:57, May 26, 2012 (UTC)